Friday, February 27, 2009

how to

All through life everyone goal is to be successful. Be successful in school. Be successful in work. Be successful in life. Or when writing a how to story. Who really judges success, in this case it Mr. Stein will judge whether or not i have written a successful how to piece. success can be achieved in many different ways. the multi billionaire who works all the time and never See's his family may call himself successful. But the electrician who makes just enough to support his family and is with his family often May also call himself successful. Success can only be judged from within. I believe i just wrote a successful how to piece, Hopefully you will feel the same way.
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  1. Jonathan FinkelsteinFebruary 27, 2009 at 6:21 AM

    I strongly agree with you Dan. I particularly like the line "But the electrician who makes just enough to support his family and is with his family often may also call himself successful". I think that it is true that one who has all the money he could ever want can still be unsuccesful in other areas of life. Well done.

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  2. Aekangi PatelFebruary 27, 2009 at 6:40 AM

    I really do agree with you as well. I think that your "how to" piece is quite unique in a number of ways. How did you even think about writing about this. Anyways, i think everything someone does, they keep in mind that they want to be successful. People themselves decide whether they think that they are successful or not. I mean someone can be a multimillionaire and still be unsuccessful because they don't have anyone that cares for them. Also a garbageman can think that he's successful because he just supported his family and that's his reason as to why he wishes to earn the money he makes. However, i thought that your little piece was actually REALLY good!!

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  3. Mr. SteinFebruary 27, 2009 at 9:14 AM

    I like you piece Dan, but I'm interested in ways people can become successful. Look at the way Moore includes many details (some of them random) that show how people can become a writer. I think you need more details (random and otherwise) to help guide people toward becoming successful. Keep writing!

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